Introduction-Thesis Statement:We are all human beings but with different characteristics.That is, even two close friends ,both of whom like making similar things, going similar places ect. have different personal features from eachother.We have really varied characteristics but people around us can't perceive these points easily.Because they are unique to a person.When they notice these interesting features, they may be very suprised. Now I want to tell my different personalities which I think that my friends don't know: being afraid of dark, wanting to visit all breathtaking places in the world and finally writing especially when I am alone.
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Topic Sentence:First of all, I am very afraid of dark that you can't imagine how much.
#I am very afraid of dark especially when I am alone in home or wherever the electricity goes off.
#In my childhood, I was afraid of dark more than now.
#I have many memories related to this fear.Some of them are very funny especially for other people but for me they are full of fear:(
#I am also very afraid of blindness.
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Topic sentence:Secondly, I want to visit all breathtaking places in the world which worth seeing.
#Since my childhood, I have had this strong desire.
#It is a kind of obsessive willing for me.
#In my childhood, I was looking at the pictures of these interesting places in the world.It was totally impossible dream for me.
#Now I think that through many ways, I can live up to my biggest dream.
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Topic Sentence:Finally I like writing, especially when I am alone.
#When I am alone, I feel in complete confusion.
#This psychological mood makes me write many different and interesting things.
#Since the day I began to write, I haven't let anyone read these writings.They tell about my inner feelings.
Conclusion:Everyone is different.The important thing that we should do is to notice this difference.
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While I was reading the introduction, I thought that the introduction was very good; but, when I see the sentence "Now I want to tell my different personalities which I think that my friends don't know: being afraid of dark, wanting to visit all breathtaking places in the world and finally writing especially when I am alone.", I have to warn you about it. It is not appropriate to announce your topic in this way. You should modify that sentence and then you can start writing your essay.
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