Internet means many things to all of us because people all over the world use it for many reasons. Of course on a that kind of comman issue, people have lots of opinions, both negative and positive. Some people think that internet is a means of reaching information easily. So it is very useful. But that can’t be the whole issue according to me. Internet is being used for doing many other harmful things also. So it has many negative effects on people like making us unsocial, taking so much of our time and disturbing our private lives.
According to some people, internet is being used to socialize people. I strongly disagree with this point of view. Via some kind of web-sites or chat rooms, people are communicating eachother. Actually they are just assuming that they are communicating. Because I don’t think that it can make people more social. On the contrary, they have become like robots standing in front of PC for long hours. They forget to go cafes or such kind of places and share their thoughts with other people face to face. We aren’t animation characters in a computer game. We are real people. So we should behave acocording to this. I believe that internet can never make people social in real sense.
People are spending much time in front of PC everyday. Generally they spend their time via playing computer games or chatting with people ect. So using internet to reach an information (which is the most useful way to use internet according to some people)is actualized less than for those purposes that I mentioned above. In this point, I can say that people are spending their time in vain. The only thing that is positive related to this issue may be enjoying because people are enjoying when doing all these activities on internet. So they can't easily see real bad effects of using internet too much. People aren’t allocating time even their basic personal needs like eating or sleeping. For example they don’t sleep enough so that they can play with games much. Maybe they are enjoying when playing games but the time they spend is really excessive and never comes back.
I think this is the most negative effect of the internet, disturbing our private life… Internet can cause us feel unwell with many ways. Some people are very expert on that area and they can easily reach many people’s private information. This means that there is no security in internet. The minor example is following, when we send an e-mail to one of our friends, some other people can reach this mail even before it is sent to whom we want. I think this is a really bothering situation. It can create many misunderstandings and problems especially if we want to share some important information with somebody. So these kind of things can be really big proplems for us. For example some people can reach our bank account numbers if they want. Just think about it, how horrible situation it would be. So in internet people should be very careful because thet aren’t alone even if they are absulately sure that they are!!
Of course, I am not oppose to using internet. When it is used with some kind of rules, it can be very useful. What I want to explain to you that in our world, internet has many negative effects on people’s lives, unfortunatelly more than its positive effects. So we should be very careful when using it if we don’t want to be in a real trouble that can cost corruptive outcomes…
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Your essay is a good example of argumentative essays. You have given your arguments in a well-orginized plan. However, I don't agree with you on the subject of socialization. I believe the internet has good effect on this issue. Lots of people can easily chat on internet, even face to face thanks to webcams. By the way your essay is written in unity. It is really good one=)
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